What Is Verbosity? | Meaning, Definition & Examples

Verbosity describes the tendency to be too wordy when writing or speaking. Verbose sentences or passages can be improved by making them shorter and simpler.

Verbosity example
“First of all, I will check the status of the order by logging on to the website and then entering the order number. Once I’ve done that, I’ll let you know either that the order is ready or, if not, what the status actually is. If it is ready, then you can go to collect it.”

The non-verbose version of this might be “I’ll let you know when the order is ready so you can pick it up.”

What is verbosity?

Verbosity comes from the Latin word verbosus, which means “wordy.” Verbosity is the noun formed from the adjective “verbose.”

Writing or speech that is verbose uses too many unnecessary words. It is often overly complicated and can be repetitive. Many writing guides warn against verbosity and with good reason. Too often, verbosity looks like a student’s writing that has been “padded out” to reach a minimum word count, or it looks like the writer is trying to show off by using as many words as possible.

Although verbosity is usually seen negatively in writing, you will see it in neutral terms in the world of computing. In software development, “verbose logging” helps software engineers receive greater details in a log of what the software was doing at any given time.

Verbosity examples

Sometimes authors will use verbosity to help them create character, as it can suggest a certain pompousness or indirectness.

Verbosity in a television show example
In Connie Booth and John Cleese’s Fawlty Towers on the BBC, Mr. Hutchinson is portrayed as annoying and officious partly through his verbosity:

“It matters not one whit.
Time is not pressing on me, fortunately.
Now some information, please.
This afternoon I have to visit the town for sundry purposes which would be of no interest to you I am quite sure but nevertheless I shall require your aid in getting for me some sort of transport, some hired vehicle that is to get me to my first port of call.” The Hotel Inspectors

In its simplest form, Mr. Hutchinson wants to know where he can order a taxi.

Verbosity can also be a narrative device that introduces humor to a situation in literature.

Verbosity in literature example
Paul Pennyfeather, the protagonist in Evelyn Waugh’s Decline and Fall, is forced into teaching, having suffered a series of undeserved misfortunes. Teaching in a failing private school is a daily battle with the absurd, and Waugh uses verbosity to portray Pennyfeather’s university friend Arthur Potts as ridiculous and detached from reality when he writes:

“There is a most interesting article in the Educational Review on the new methods that are being tried at the Innesborough High School to induce co-ordination of the senses. They put small objects into the children’s mouths and make them draw the shapes in red chalk. Have you tried this with your boys? I must say I envy you your opportunities. Are your colleagues enlightened?”

Frequently asked questions about verbosity

How do you use verbosity in a sentence?

You can use verbosity in a sentence to say that someone’s writing or speaking is too wordy:

“I have nothing against complicated sentences, but this is nothing but pointless verbosity!”

“Keep your writing as simple and to-the-point as possible and avoid verbosity at all costs.”

“Inexperienced writers often suffer from verbosity, mistaking it for a show of skill. The real skill, however, lies in writing clear, concise, and uncomplicated text.”

You can use Scribbr’s free paraphrasing tool to help you avoid verbosity.

What is the antonym of verbosity?

There are several possible antonyms of verbosity, including:

  • Brevity: Meaning shortness of speech or writing.
  • Conciseness/concision: Expressing much in a few words.
  • Succinctness: Like concise, using few words to express much.
  • Terseness: Using few words, to the point of not saying enough.
  • Laconic: Using very few words.
  • Pithy: Using few words, with a sense of being pointedly humorous or critical.

The Scribbr paraphrasing tool is a great way of finding the antonym of verbosity and discovering new ways of phrasing your writing.

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Trevor Marshall

Trevor has a BA (Hons) in English Literature and Language, an MSc in Applied Social Studies, and Qualified Teacher Status in the UK. He has worked as a probation officer, social worker, and teacher. Having taught English Literature and Language in two schools in Prague for 15 years, he is now freelancing as a photographer and writer.